Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

Thank you for this fanfic, there were many ups and downs for me but to be honest, this is an epic fanfic, keep doing what you do, someone like you will probably reach high places if you keep it up. Good luck in your future endeavours

This is was the best Naruto fanfic

Excellent fanfiction, you delivered on all your promises. Will you try your hand on fandoms of TV or keep going with Animes ? Thank you again for sharing your work and for finishing it. It was a real pleasure to read this, of course your others fanfic are just as interesting. I really liked the paradox, it's much better than if it was a ROB or any god responsible for his reincarnation. ( it have always been Yami and only Yami ) Ps: Does the citadel is a wink to Rick & Morty ?

A very long and fulfilling journey indeed. It was the most complete and unique ending that I have seen any fanfic

thank you for the novel, the story had its pace and the writing improvement really showed over time. this ending is great. now onto your one piece fanfiction and your original novel ..

Great fanfic HolyJoker bro! Can't wait for another!

our one year journey I have been hear since the first day

Author this KINDA reminds me of That Time I Got Reincarnated as A slime. SPOILER Rimuru travels to the time he dies and saves himself

This was epic mr author, I only have one request now, please start putting the dxd novel in here with your other one piece one. I just think dxd with all its different factions has a super interesting potential for someone like yami.

Maximum Respect

It was a bit of a strange journey for me because this type of MC doesn't appeal to me too much (on the part just of them and no one else, the rest of their manipulative and deceptive personality if I like) but I still enjoyed reading this.

Imagine an alternate version of Yami in Reverend Insanity Just a bunch of people scheming against each other that world

Thank you for this novel. This was the greatest Naruto fanfiction I have ever read.

please do your highschool dxd fanfic

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Thank you.

It was an awesome journey but one thing I want to know is that........what started the loop? Did he just reincarnated to that world naturally, only later he come back to reincarnate himself because he didn't want to disrupt the space time continuum? If he didn't reincarnate to that world somehow in the first place he wouldn't be able to come back in time to start the loop.............ughh I don't know lol. Anyway it was a great read, thanks for making such a great fic and ending it.

Ty for the chapter!~

Wow. It ends. What a journey.