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Comments of chapter undefined of illicit relationship

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illicit relationship

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Fantasy_king
Fantasy_kingLv12Fantasy_king

we are really not enjoying this same old cliche stories, please use some new kind of plots

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Fantasy_king
Fantasy_kingLv12Fantasy_king

I know it is hard but this cliche plot is too old, you remember my 1 big comment just few days ago I wrote, that you can consider making XT more anti - hero kind of mc. this cao song is plotting against him and he doesn't have any clue. this plot is tooo boring now. he needs to be more of evil / anti hero mc who can destroy those rich fking young masters before they plan anything

Shooting_Star:making a plot is hard. I always try to make a new plot, but because you have read too many novel, everything always end up the same in your eyes. making a story is not as easy as you think, bruh.
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BWSIR
BWSIRLv3BWSIR

Thx for the chapter! I found these chapters about the orphanage unnecessary unless they are to deeper the relationship between Xiao and Leng

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