Shooting_Star
I’m the side person just watching waiting for all his women to meet up and find out they’re not the only one
Just some suggestion: 1. You can change the word "dick" to "cock" since it's hotter that way. Saying dick in sex scene is like saying peepee or weewee, its childish and not sexy. 2. People usually never call their CEO as "CEO (insert name)". They just call him "sir", "mr xiao", "boss" etc. And even tho he was a playboy in his past life, sometimes he's just too ignorant about girl's feelings. It's a little bit contradictory. He should already understand basic women's feeling. This story have a lot potential and i hope you can improve your writing skill. Good luck