Comments of chapter undefined of The Wielder of Death Magic

My only issue is that I have to guess when he is thinking or speaking. Using single quotes for thought and double for speaking is common. I'd love to see that happen. Great story so far, need to work on the dialog, but that's all amature writers.

I'm confused does he want to kill her or pay her back for her kindness

Am I the only one who is thinking if he is going to kill them all and that he is a sadist

I am loving this book

I am little confused about mc character... I guess I will read more and then decide to drop or not

yeah right

Thanks

Love it

The story is so good!!! Keep it up!!!

Wonderful. Just wonderful

finally an apperently mentally ill mc. this is interesting

I'm enjoying this book so much thank you for your hard work