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Comments of chapter undefined of Dimensional Paradise

Neokaiser
NeokaiserLv2Neokaiser

it's boring. there's not a lot of MC exposure yet but the story is already switching pov to supporting characters. at least try to build up the MC first before switching pov. this is a legend of legends copy cat alright. I can tell the MC is gonna be a fascist hero type shouldering the fate of the universe. hays

Kenrio
KenrioLv10Kenrio

this story is similar to legend of legend to the point when reading is like reading legend of legend again

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx

A_tired_immortal
A_tired_immortalLv6A_tired_immortal

⚜️Thanks for the chapter⚜️