Comments of chapter undefined of The Fallen Consort

Author, I know you said English is your 3rd language so there might be errors, but just wanted to let you know the few errors you have so far are mainly a few present tense/past tense mixups and short/choppy sentences, so really it's pretty good! And it looks like a really good plot so far, so I'm excited to see where it goes! ^_^

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Just start to read because have read another novel from the same author 😉😉😉😉 so come here to read it

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Amazing start! Can't wait to read more. ^_^

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I’m already loving this story!

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