Comments of chapter undefined of The Chronicles of Elijah

I honestly haven’t noticed the bad grammar Im just absorbed in the story so good job don’t know what everyone else is talking about

Don't mind them. Your fanfic novel is fantastic. Continue writing. Dont be influenced by the criticism

I was to focused on story i did not notice any grammar mistakes

Most, and I do mean most, Americans have worse grammar than you do. I feel most of the complaints are more referring to your sentence structure being unusual and sometimes scattered but that has more to do with your skill as an author and less with your mastery of the English language. Personally I enjoy this story a great deal and hope you continue it

You can try Grammarly. It’s free.

I like this novel and i can understand. i don't care other things

What bad grammar, this better than most story's out there in the grammar department, as far as I see you are doing great for your first story

Yes if they have time to notice gramnar mistakes in this novel then they should go to library and leave the fan fics to others to read them im expecting more chapters and no fixing this weekend please

I find your grammar to be better than 80-95 percent of the American population, so keep writing work good.😄😄😂😂lol

T'inquiète pas, tu gère déjà bien l'anglais je trouve

you make a good job man, if you need some help with editors maybe you can create disscord for know some ppl like this!!

Fourth language geez I have no room to complain I found the story engaging enough to really ignore the grammar and understand the gist of what you are going for

See what you guys did now he might drop this story and if he does I am blaming y'all and HAIZTAM don't mind these people just keep doing your thing love story keep it up💯 heck even I didn't notice cuz I was so into the story

buddy don't ever listen to those people they are just haters so just ignore them so far your grammary is great there are even some people use google translate and their stories are still good not forget about your novel it's a work of art but a question you made jean look older than natasha i am sure it's the other way anyway no harm don't even some minor changes won't make it bad but please add natasha to the bed club so it would be foursome and that enough hela jean natasha please 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 buddy and you never explain or even talk about bed ( night activities )

You’re doing a great job

I love this

Nah not very disturbing. You have good grammar than other novel like trial novel sometimes.

I have no prob with your grammar

yes you are lol