Comments of chapter undefined of Treasures of Heaven and Earth

I appreciate the encouragement. I genuinely appreciate it as, personally, as a reader I find myself disappointed in my 'voice'. I feel that many other authors I read do a better job at making their words paint a picture, with less words and a more relaxed flow, which makes for a more enjoyable read. I have not quite found that sweet spot in my own writing, despite trying on and off for years - although this is the first novel I have published on a consistent schedule - don't ask about the other attempts, they never really got off the ground