Comments of chapter undefined of Treasures of Heaven and Earth
Treasures of Heaven and Earth
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don't worry. she goes all harleyquinn once her bloodlust gets up. But she is hundreds of years old if not thousands so her acting like a crazed bezerker when asking to pass the salt seemed like a plothole in itself. If she can't control herself how believable she survived and has high ranks and responsibilities?
catvi:i guess the character introduction and subsequent development of her persona is just too glaringly different. at one point i thought it was because it was too diffe~cult to~ wr~ite like~ this~. But then I see you adding all the shi, ke, and that weird '`' about chun and dailans names... so that cant be it.
