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Comments of chapter undefined of Haven Online

Memi
MemiLv5Memi

i know you may think of this story is a failure of what you were thinking it about to be but for me the novel was perfect the way it was , i love the characters, their interaction and the way the story was going. i will love it if you can continue it even if is just a chapter a week, a month no matter, but please continue 😭😭😭😭😭

T3A
T3ALv11T3A

I... i dont want to be aggitated by this but i am, and i know that its your decision and that its best because it is your baby, your creation. But man i read 257 chapters, weeks and even months of my life feel wasted in a way (as dramatic as that sounds) and even though i stopped midway somewhere i came back because every once and a while i would think about it and remember the characters i fell in love with and the enchanting way you write that made it all the more better. i dont know i just really like the way the story is going and dont feel as though anything is being rushed, i finally seen some growth in the MC and the ML and yeah there might have been some plot holes here and there but i feel those could be explained later on.... idk i just really liked how THIS book was going and not some remake. Despite the negative feelings i most likely will be reading your other books but i do really hope that you could rethink it and continue this book

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Hastatii
HastatiiLv13Hastatii

It sounds pretty diferent form this story Is there a chance you could continue both? XD not at the same time or soon just some day I really liked this story, the characters and the pace of the story But well i hope you do fine and of course I’m gonna read the new one too 👍👍😂

TwilightHeat
TwilightHeatLv13TwilightHeat

If everything has changed in the novel than it isnt a rewrite but a whole new novel. Im really irritated that this novel wont get finished. The he only reason i continued reading this is because it was a BL combined with elements of gaming. The characters were awesome and the story was magical. 😞 this super sucks.

Guy_Wise
Guy_WiseLv14Guy_Wise

I saw nothing wrong with how this story was progressing and was really loving it.

famus_tem
famus_temLv15famus_tem

im pretty sure haven would have worked out if you give the side chars some character devolopment... maybe a plot arc of them experiencing the hunger update crisis alone?

Linleybabe
LinleybabeLv5Linleybabe

it's still bl novel?

GreatDaoofspace
GreatDaoofspaceLv15GreatDaoofspace

And book 2?🥺

pnkpearl
pnkpearlLv5pnkpearl

author I don't know if you will ever get to see this but I still haven't given up on this I fell in love with the story and it's characters and I've been really saddened by the fact that I probably would never get to see the end of it. I keep coming back hoping that maybe you will ever remember this poor reader who can't seem to forget this wonderful novel. I hope you would stay safe and thank you.

Infinite_Monty
Infinite_MontyLv14Infinite_Monty

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

Susan_Dilly
Susan_DillyLv14Susan_Dilly

See this! I just gifted the story: Ring

Daoist123569
Daoist123569Lv11Daoist123569

ty

lunapi
lunapiLv13lunapi

maomii

PaNdA
PaNdALv15PaNdA

I have already start reading this book...

Ekmah
EkmahLv14Ekmah

:D

Hey_Its_kitty
Hey_Its_kittyLv10Hey_Its_kitty

Eh? Isn't this same as Falin Saga?