Chado_Sama
I would like to ask (suggest if possible) if you could have daphne greengrass as a wife / lover as she is usually represented as having a good personality for the MC to use his business ... outside that you can make her more submissive to someone who shows enough power and loyalty to whom she recognized as a husband because she was raised as pure blood ... I'm not asking to do this, I just think it could be used ... I would like to know your opinion if possible ... ah ... i really like your fanfic ... if possible more updates ... hehe. thanks.
Welp that is the reason. I mostly avoid writing reviews mine are often too subjective and help none except me staving off my annoyance when I read a bad(not my type isn't bad, bad is no grammar(and I've read MTL), extreme logic errors) story, that I hoped would get better later on(either due too opinionated reviews or it being a new author). And sadly for good ones I am mostly too lazy and "great story 5 stars" Is, in my opinion, a terrible review. I always write a whole essay in comparison.
Itâs amusing to me that once he starts into an argument before replying he researches the background of the person before replying. Still I couldnât give two ****âs about what he has to say, the fact that you do means you need to build up a bit more skin author. I myself will say things like âthis story is bad etc etcâ although I will always give reasons why if Iâm ever asked. I have also wrote things myself in the past and know the effort that goes into it. Stay strong my dude (Author) peeps be jealous of your stories.