Jmwells2003
There's such a thing as too much. 1 chapter(2 a4 pages, printed in p14) a month, is basically a dead novel, when it comes to something of this scope... Unless you have plans to drastically increase your writing pace again at some point. This is literally never going to be finnished... I would normally be more patient. But here I am more worried that the novel will never be finnished, than I am worried about stressing you out about it. You need to start putting more focus on this, or this novel will not be completed in our life-time.
The first half was wasted... he got suckerpunched by anna and nothing happened... where is my sweet revenge? Your just gonna let that pass? Her Action was uncalled for. either get payback and teach her that you dont do shit like that to friends, or cut her out of your life and become as she already treats you which is not a friend...