TheRedQueen
Great story, great characters, great plot. If anything, if only there were much less frequency of them smoking. I noticed both your novels' main characters mostly smoke and it mentioned oftenly. I'm not against those who smokes, it's totally their own rights. But cutting the smoking frequency will not effect the story however will be more neutral for the smokers as well as non smoker reader. I hope this comment doesn't offend anyone. Peace โ๏ธ