Vrinda13
@_Vrinda#308539 I've read the 1st chapter... It's quite an interesting start and there were some slips of sentence structure, but they were minor, so not a big deal. đAnd about the start, I'll be honest the start seemed like the hidden marriage with the pregnant but u got me up gal(or guy... Lol). The paragraphing is also fine which compliments the flow. For the last ending of the 1st chapter, if I were to chose, then I would have stopped at the the ex-bf getting the pistol with the MFL losing consciousness... That would be a great cliff hanger ig... But yours was good as well... That's all for the 1st Chap
I'm gonna be honest, I kind of read this story on light reader and it was awesome, I just never got a chance to write my thoughts. So here's the thing, this story is just so much more, a year later I still keep this story in mind. I have been looking for others like bit end up finding none. This was an inspiration to me as a writer a reader and as a dreamer. I find myself occasionally comparing my life to Mei's as an actor and as a CEO lover. So thank you dear writer. This story changed my life. It opened my eyes and raised my standards. Thank you so much. Please write more like this. Lots of love, one of your greatest fans. đđđâ¤ď¸ thank you writer. No words can express how this story impacted me.