JasmineJosef
Author...applause and a bow to your talent and skill to weave an immense load of emotions and detail into your story. Zamiel is so fascinating and yet so simple. He is definitely the antithesis of what Lothaire is (Represents) and has been doing. I love the play of contrast between Lothaire and Zamiel. They haven’t even met yet and there is so much unsaid dialogue happening. By far Zamiel has reached Zarin without as much as a few sentences here and there...
Good job Zemiel, for teaching Zarin what he can achieve without using his demon powers to influence others. Euphorin is helping Zarin by making him think about what he is feeling and what he wants. Zarin is unhappy he miss his family, with Euphorian’s help and Zemiel’’s kindness he is having doubts about his decision. Maybe there is hope for Zarin after all!
With just going through a day with Zamiel and Euphorion, Zarin has learned so much. Zamiel is employing the same technique he used with lewd old man as he is now doing with Zarin. However, Zarin has yet to make that connection. I also think Zamiel is hoping Lothaire is closely watching his interaction with Zarin and Euphorion and getting angrier by the minute.
When Zamiel first entered the scene I was apalled with his charcter. As the scenes unfolded and we got to learn his real self, depite being a demon, he became likable...slowly. Then, somehow...somewhere the author....must have possessed my own mind, because without being aware, I found I became his champion! 🤷♀️ That can only happen with great writing. This chapter was a favorite because it holds an inportant lesson in life....leading by example. Without using special powers or demon influence, he was able to show Zarin a different and more rewarding lifestyle. i can’t wait to read the next chapter. Absolutely spellbinding...without the use of magic....or....is our author really bewitching?!? ♥️🖤♥️