JasmineJosef
I am really starting to enjoy where you're weaving the Bible into the back story. In the first couple books/parts I was wondering where/how/if this would come up with it seemed like we were being led to believe the devil wasn't all that bad. love how Heaven is in tune and picking up on his flaws, insecurities, and hot buttons. He's not all that great afterall... is he? He's just another fallen, jealous, vengeful little dude with an ax to grind.
Wow tbat was a very good chapter. she found the devils Achilles’ heel I need more chapters jazz. I just gotta know more. i love your writing, youve gained a dan for life. Ill read everything you write now. This has the potential to be the next Harry Potter in my opinion. Id wager that i aint the only one to thinik that eiitger. Keep up the great writing
Heaven is such a brilliant character. I think she is going to put him in his place REAL quick! What a beautiful chapter! I loved it. I think after a while, Lothaire is going to realize he made a mistake by forcing Heaven to come there. She is truly passionate, powerful and amazing in her own ways, and not in the ways he wants her to be. I really love watching her character blossom and change! I can't wait to see what happens next!! 💜