JasmineJosef
Irene has lots of compassion, love, patience, and unwavering support for the ones she loves. She knows Zarin needs to do some soul searching and has aligned himself with Lothaire to help his cause. Letting Zarin make his mistake and how heāll repair the rift, will ultimately show the world his true character. Itās best to do this early in life, learn from it, and grow.
Grandma Irene has a plan!! I think she knows so much more than she is letting on. And she knows Grandpa better than anyone. Sheās like a secret untapped weapon. Shes caring, calm and understanding but I think sheāll be fierce when she needs to be. Canāt wait to see what she has up her sleeve to protect all her cubs!!
Jasmine, all of the chapters are great, but you just provided 3 that are extra great! I love that you gave us both Heaven and Zamiel's reactions to the same day so that we know the thoughts and feelings of each and how they mesh. And the love scene was perfect. Neither one of them was undressed, and Zamiel took pleasure simply from giving Heaven pleasure! They then shared their thoughts and fell asleep together. Perfect ending to the day, and a perfect start to the next day! Jazzy, you are a talented story teller!!!
At this point I'm just living for this story. I can't even count how many times I go over it in my head daily. If Jazz don't get a great book deal out of this, something is seriously wrong with the book world. I was in love with Lucian, I didn't want to here about Zamiel at first, but Jazz was able to write you into loving Zamiel even more š VERY TALENTED WRITER. FAMILY, FRIENDSHIP, LUST, LOVE, SUSPENSE......