JasmineJosef
Never imagining I’d ever read about demons, devils and witches, I became intriged in the story. However, the grammar, misspelled words making you having to stop, rearrange your train of thought to what was actually meant. I am not being grammar police type of person but when one is used for on or a phrase is repeated in the same sentence it stops the flow.
Look this chapter let you see lucian is a good demon, witch and the king of powerful to talk to the order Witches and other demon to show them that don’t mess with him, also to see the beginning Of the happiness Between Irene and lucian( His call her”mother” ), that make irene So so happy And lucian , too. the cry in the happiness ........, now Until next chapter ....