JasmineJosef
Loving this story can't wait to see what happens next. EVERYONE PLEASE STOP BEING SO CRITICAL ABOUT THE MISTAKES MADE BY THE AUTHOR ....HAVE ANY OF YOU TRIED TO WRITE A STORY OR EVEN A POEM. ITS REALLY HARD WORK AND WE ALL HUMAN AND MAKE MISTAKES AND TYPOS, BUR DOESN'T MEAN THAT WE AS READERS HAVE THE RIGHT TO SO NEGATIVE ABOUT MISTAKES IN A STORY. AS I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN TAUGHT JUDGE NOT LEAST YOU BE JUDGE BY OTHERS.