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Comments of chapter undefined of Prime Originator

JcnPeng
JcnPengLv15JcnPeng

hmm...it seems like Sebastian is still alive, I wonder why...?

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Zetsway
ZetswayLv12Zetsway

Dude, you should take a break or try to sketch out a new arc, because, if you are starting to forget your characters, you are starting to lose interest in the story....And as a side-note, the best way to make it seem like you didn't forget about her was simply resoning that they left her home to sleep(it was night, she had no reason to wake up). they did after all, go to a presumed warzone, why take a child with them.

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KarmaRetribution
KarmaRetributionLv3KarmaRetribution

...HOW COULD YOU FORGET ABOUT A LOLI?!(now don't get me wrong Im NOT a loli-con, its just that, well... ITS A FRIGGIN LOLI WOULD YOU FORGET YOUR LITTLE SISTER AT HOME WITH NO ONE ELSE!?)

Daoist37
Daoist37Lv5Daoist37

I'll be honest here. I forgot about her too.......

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Roshaan
RoshaanLv6Roshaan

thx

Daoistk8jeCG
Daoistk8jeCGLv15Daoistk8jeCG

I just assumed she was in the car and quiet because all the serious conversation

Blazing_1NS4N1TY
Blazing_1NS4N1TYLv15Blazing_1NS4N1TY

a happy accident. way to adorable

El_Rasskull
El_RasskullLv4El_Rasskull

[img=recommend] Thanks for the chapter [img=recommend]

Freddie_Martinez
Freddie_MartinezLv14Freddie_Martinez

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NyDarKKen
NyDarKKenLv5NyDarKKen

Tftc

fattynomore
fattynomoreLv15fattynomore

Love this

saves
savesLv12saves

Hi

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx

InquisitorCrusader
InquisitorCrusaderLv15InquisitorCrusader

They all suck