Comments of chapter undefined of Birth of the Demonic Sword

So, that escalated quite quickly. How should I put it, let's see. I feel like I've always been quite clear about Noah's character and, as readers, it's completely in your right to like it or not. However, that won't change my approach to the story: as I said at the beginning, I'm overprotective toward my novel and I'll keep on writing it the way I mean to write it. I can accept critiques about mistakes and fix them (like it happened in the previous chapters) but I won't modify the story cause you want specific qualities to appear on the MC. As for the blaming Doris, I don't really know when that happened. She hindered Noah's escape so he killed her, simple as that.

Annoying and smug female character appears. Too many stories would have her become friend's with MC and boss him around and treat him like dirt and MC will just take. This story he kills her right away. Love this story.😁

This chapter definitely shocked me. I liked how the author introduced doris and deleted doris so fast. It was like a cliche plot to develop but only to abruptly end.

I have been reading the story since the beginning, I have been following the character's character development and I can say that it is very consistent with what the author reported. As for the situation highlighted in this chapter, it even surprised me, I was pleasantly surprised by the author's determination to keep the character consistent and uninfluenced by the readers, this is my favorite feature in this story.

The MC is just a mass murderer and he owns it to be hanged. He goes around killing people as if it’s his sport. The sole reason Doris had to die was him. The same pattern happened before and will happen very often again. Innocent people dying to fill chapters. You can’t just bring death to people cause you feel inconvenient. Also for those saying she brought her self in that situation you are wrong. BECAUSE she was already a week long in the swamp and from their interaction we can even find out she was in the centre of the group. There were the rank 4 are AND she was NEVER DISCOVERED(she was in perfect condition so she never made a mistake in that time) only when or little MC pops up she gets discovered. Also described is that she knew she can’t run as she is a stealth specialized hunter not an agility.

This was brutal. It did rub me the wrong way since i like good natured heroes but it fits Noah's character perfectly so i applaud you author for sticking to your protagonist's character faithfully and not falling for the normal tropes and cliche's. and WE NEED MORE CHAPTERSSSS. Again great work.

Damn Noah was decisive when she grabbed him.

Hey author, can you tell me one thing. Do you plan on succumbing to those whiners and change his character to soften their sweet hearts? I really would like to know, i hate redemption stories, i like Noah as he is right now. Mass murderer that should be hanged - good i love that. I found your story couple days ago and its great. Looking at the tears of white knights i m more and more annoyed that one of my favorite novels can be infuenced by them. I dont know if you read comments, but if you do - let me know what your plans are. I dont want to dump stones on a soft piece of sh1t that found his morality cuz of sweet girl or smth. And once more GREAT NOVEL AND MC!!!

Using the logic of our society to censor someone who lives in a society with different rules and principles is wrong, the comments related to "he could just throw her, he didn't have to kill her, what is the use of power if he doesn't use it?" correctly?" this is completely wrong, first that she would die even if he did not kill her, and he gained his power not to be restrained by others, because the hell would he be restrained by the opinions of people on earth living in a totally different world, with principles totally many different? You can't have a narrow mind to appreciate this kind of story, you need to know how to separate things. Just my opinion here.

Hey author! I see a lot of white knights want to influence your great novel, and make MC look like a soft b1tch. I found your novel 5 days ago and this is what i wanted to read since my experience with this site. You made a great character, i just pray that it wont be a redemtion story, when he will find a true love or power of friendship... Bleahh. Keep him dark or darker, its not a nice world. Killing caan benefit him? -Good, kill more. You have my full support!!!

I hate all of these retarded people still complaining about him being a murderer. Thats the whole fucking point of the book you retards. You have read it for 182 chaps and still dont realise it. Mr goodie two shoes go read your typical harem **** with the main character being a pussy

Whats better than KSing noobs? Thats right stealing their lootbags gg ez free items

The writing is so inconsistent lol. The mc is just being edgy for no reason at all. He wants to lay low and avoid troubles but keeps making new ones himself. Dropping this novel like a hot turd.

Well this escalated quickly. With the last two chapter it feels like the main character has started to become a little too arrogant. For people who read this story and think Noah is out of character you are completely wrong. He didn't kill anyone in school because it was in school. There where many times he wanted to kill someone he just held it in. The main character is a no bull**** person. If it wasn't for the fact the drunk was currently useful for him he would've dumped that old man too. His only goal has been to survive and get revenge. My only issue with the last two chapters is pretty simple. He main goal was to keep things hidden. With his normal character he would've read all the rules not to draw any hidden troubles to himself. I hope to God the author doesn't change the main character's personality just so useless conflict is created.

Hi Doris ! bye Doris ! ... Oh boy her boyfriend/admirer/fiance is defy going to try to make Noah's life hell

This chapter satisfied something within me that other stories just can't do. Killing off the annoying cocky girl from the beginning 😌

That was such a idiotic way to progress the story. He already has problems with Nobles, yet now he'll start more with the guild. If they don't suspect him it'll be a big plot hole.

that just stupid of the author making a story of a villain in the making is never good thing people will start to hate the novel eventually. the real world has enough of merciless killer and villains don't to add one in a novel if you are to make him the ruthless at less do it with a reason not like here where it's clearly it's his fault

Novel dropped.