Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the darkness

Am I the only of felt the his name should be Lucifer

it seems nice and has potential, but i would recommend not to make MC do evil things just for sake of evil, give a reason behind it, add some depth to the character

It's a decent transmigration no stupid and useless wishes, and better yet no system it's so overuse its gotten boring. Overall great work, keep it up.

Behold the dark lord stephan/ behold the devil stephan... A little bof for name

Noooooooo , not a system! you betrayed me ! you were suppose to be the chosen one !

“Pretty good kid, most people go crazy floating in the void.” “Well I was alone in the attic a lot... basically the same thing...” uhh what? I don’t know how those two things are comparable but ok.

I thought he want to be the devil?🤨 Why not Lucifer? I think the author got memories problem

And his name... Was Stephen. Yeah no not digging that name at all

the kid is stupid his parents abuse him and he lets them live I was abused and I would have gladly have killed my parents at my age and I was the same age as the main character. If you make a dark character don't make him an idiot. Who would do that he said either kill them or kill yourself and what does he do neither and guess what your parents decide to kill you instead they abused you what did you expect, for them to now start to love no they rather kill you. This is my opinion and then the child said I'll be neither then he says I'll be the devil the kid doesn't understand such concepts. The Devil is pure evil in every religion or folklore he is evil neither is just someone out for their own interest. In the last chapter you have him work for bad people so his understanding of evil and good should have made him see his parents as evil so why should he have cared for them. I know you just trying for him to get transmigrated but you could have had him kill his prefecture latter on he could die on a mission and have him die like an idiot and he thanks his uncle, NO ONES THAT DUMD, unless your retarded but this is my opinion. I'll continue to read this hopping to see the story improve if not I'll just stop reading it but I hope the story is as good as I hope.

Why not Lucifer Mornigstar instead of Stephan Morningstar or would you be sued if you used it ?

And I thought he will name himself as Bond....James Bond...

Such an underwhelming name.. sigh

his name should be Lucifer

I second that

wow Stephan really ahhh i think when he was in the dark prison he lost his brain cells dumbass

the child does not know what a system is, there are two types of systems, the social system and the statistical reinforcement system, I suppose that the MC confuses it with the social system The social system and the statistical reinforcement system are different things. You don't even have internet access, so I guess you've never read novels or don't know the concept of these things. Worst of all, the child avoids the word "system" so much that he doesn't even try to know what its benefits are, what the system is or what he means by the system, in fact, the entity is also stupid for not explaining that is.

Seriously though. Why Stephen ?

It hurts to read

Thanks for the chapter