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😑Why was he so chill just killing people??? Apparently he was an orphan with a not so great life who watched Naruto and played games (according to author so far) then he reincarnanted and still does f*ck all even though he's apparently a smart kid which I'm having trouble figuring out becuase if he's just smart in school thats still just 10th grade standards which aint much but when you compare him to Peter Parker 😣ughh then he should be a genius in atleast some form but we've gotten no indication of that besides him picking up how to fight relatively quickly without ya'know ever actually sparring with someone >w < so where's this emotionless killer coming from??? If he's bright then he should've realised that there's alot more things he could kill to obtain points before just jumping to humans but nooope ;/ just a months worth of Data Analyst (an entire department that most police precincts have along with f*cking detectives) esk work in Google searching and newspaper clippings and boom he knows where an escaped convicted murderer is going to show along with the meeting location of a notorious gang AND the fact that the cars he planted whatever he planted in were the merch said gang was getting ready to sell. >w < its just so f*cking convoluted and stupid that I don't understand how there are even more chapters... this fic has to have atleast killed one person by melting their brain cuz the more I read the more insane it gets.
Goddamnit I just got to the first fight scene and his first kill and this is what I got.... Seriously man... Even without Sharingan or any type of bloodline that could help with his actual combat prowess he just had to watch a few vids and run around his room like that 1 dumbass that actually went to area 51 for a month molding chakra and boom, can easily contend with grown ass adults with weapons. Why in the f*** are they even using melee for the first two guys instead of shooting him??? Also supposedly if he's as smart as Peter F*cking Parker why is his life so pathetically normal before the system came along?? Magic is a real goddamn thing in Marvel and he knows that xc its just so goddamn difficult to read about a Mary Sue that literally can't put in an ounce of effort xc
Why tf on every page do I have to read about him "blending in with the shadows" for f***s sake man seriously??? Does he even have a jutsu to do that? Or is it the same as this edgy af aura that blankets his surroundings literally every time he gets hard at the thought of doing cool shit or just protecting his family. F*ck man it just completely ruins the flow when reading.
I don’t get it. It saids you need to take a life to earn points yeah? Well what the system didn’t specify was what type of life, restrictions if you will. For all we know, all he needs is to buy a few million ants and then burn them all to gain points. After all even the weakest of insects are living creatures with a soul of their own, however minuscule they are.