Comments of chapter undefined of Fate Online: Shadow

Died instantly from continuous bloodloss? How is that instant? With no wastage of bullets he fired recklessly? How is that not wastefull? If he never left any information of himself anywhere then how did the police know he was the Shadow upon seeing him? If author reads this I would recommend fixing these.

Yikes...this is so cringy

Hope him and Amanda get together again

this Grammer is killing me ,and the story seems like it was wrote by a kid.;)

thanks for the chapter

Did you update the chapter? I got a notification...

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ok, so now I'm gonna start reading this one. for now i am hopeful.

this novel has been butchered.

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i hope he kill that senator again

this story is so amazingg!! I love it very much 😍😍😍 Good job, author 👍👍

he then turns around and you can swear above him you see the Visage of a terrible monster awoken from deep slumber and it has been messed with one to many times. sun dun dunnnnnnn

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