Comments of chapter undefined of Fate Online: Shadow

So I wanted to make sure I understand correctly, Michael started the VRGame not knowing having learned anything about it from 13 F@CKING YEARS in the future of life and gameplay and is just winging it; no Easter Eggs, no special secrets whatsoever, just a Murder Hobo with no actual Set Goals. His Wife is obviously not a priority even though he has to wait a month to actually meet her again, it seems he an Actual Idiotic person who doesn't deserve a second chance.

Tommy and Tommy two brothers with parents with bad naming sense

Fantastic Idea!! "Since your father killed my wife in real life. I will steal your boss from you and kill you in this game, where you can again respawn as though nothing happened, so that you can feel my pain of losing my loved one." Great comparison author. Let me ask you a question: Didn't you ever expect that it would be a ****ty logic when you wrote the book?

why put the nickname as Shadow if you keep calling him Michael when he’s in the game? would be better if u put his nickname Michael too

2 players with the name Tomy?

Seeing as how the Author is giving forced plot and plot armor to the MC from the beginning, I presume it will continue everytime. My eyes hurts from seeing him constantly surprised from everything, always saying "wow" every f***ing time. wtf? how is he an assassin with a mind like that.

Everything here is so aggravating to read, story all over the place, bad phrasing and paragraphing, author has a clear lack of knowledge concerning video game terms, characters are unstable as hell - ppl told me it's getting better, but when exactly will this eyebleed of a writing style be fixed? Anyone got a chapter number of hope to share? T.T

thanks for the chapter

I vote all my remaining powers stones to your novel well tnx for the chapter anyway

Aahhh cliffhanger

OHHHHH! Hype! Hype! Hype!

thankyou!!

Oi oi oi hey where is our next chapter?

No Chapter Today?

thanks for the chapter

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nice chapter

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