Comments of chapter undefined of Return of The Devil's Son

I mean if English isn’t her first language, she’s honestly doing a bomb job. I never would have known and most of the mistakes a little ones anyone who is an English speaker makes regularly

Good job Hazel, Klara & Irene for helping the soldiers!

🤣🤣🤣 Klara is falling in love

I love how you’re all standing up for the author!! Good people really do exist in this world❤️ also, great job on both this and the first book! I’ve actually paid money to read them which is something I’ve vowed to never do lol

Come on Klara! Act on it!! Also, those coming for the author for writing an enticing story in a language other than their native tongue, can go pound sand! To the author: keep doing you girl! Your fans are doing nothing but supporting you and your work!

I agree! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story! I have been obsessed with it for a week now.

Why does this story not support power stones!!! Ugh but I will continue to vote on first book to show support!

As someone that prides herself in writing, proof reading, a minor in Professional & Creative writing, LET THE AUTHOR LIVE!! Writing mistakes happen, we are so lucky this novel is overall extremely well written with minor typos. There are no plot holes, excellent recurring characters, character development and it is entertaining to read!!

I love the friendship that is growing between Klara and Hazel.

I aM so glad they got a chance to help Lucians men.

I think for this author not having English as her/his first language her story is very well written. It’s a beautiful story

I can't help but laugh at the comments about the very few spelling errors. I've read novels and books in college that have errors. Don't forget to tuck and roll when y'all fall off your high horse.

I would have looked at the word “yacht” and gave up, author is a boss. Honestly I hope this is made into movies. That would be amazing as heck👌🥺.

Every time I read this story, I feel like the characters are old friends. Does that make sense? Am I the only one who feels that way?

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I’m so into this story!!!! Great job author

great work author

nice book