Reili
That person has not made a positive comment on this novel going back a while now. They obviously do not actually read the novel or have a clue about world building or characterization, so I am sure that anything that goes beyond a fight scene is beyond their scope. Instead of enjoying a beautifully written novel, with excellent character growth, unique scenarios, and more than enough action for almost anyone else, they only complain. I do not get it. Please let me know what novel you have written so I can see your skills or give the name of your published work? (this is to the troll.) Reili, you do amazing work, thank you for all that you have done so far.
I am sure Shiro is going to learn well so when she returns and after Olympus she is going to start developing her anchors and domains which will strengthen the spirits. I really want to see what her domain looks like and how strong it will be. (Eleven elements plus nanotech, she's going to be strong, ha ha ha.)