Reili
I say, miss Nanomancer is too caught up in the past, eat an ice cream and calm down. Now, do you see that nickname belonging to the new hero? Yeah, the hidden meaning behind that is to keep your freaking distance. Also, what godly skill does that knight have to perfectly interpret the head shaking and nodding language of a retard so perfectly? Did he used to work in a mental hospital or something?
A bunch of exposition. Shops, world history, factions. Even if the factions aren't well-paced (the idea is fine, but the details are useless at this point in the story, so there's no value in providing exposition on them right now), the rest is reasonable to summarize. Uses generic, "I hate all heroes because one hero hurt me" character issue. A bit cheap and non-nuanced. Also doesn't matter for dozens of chapters, and doesn't add anything on top of what was learned in the first chapter. Has a tendency to misspell "peek" as "peak".