Comments of chapter undefined of Versatile: Alternate World

So he got there merely 2 hours before the grand opening which is at 7:00 am yet somehow managed to be the first person in line? Really? No people that camped there in line days before the actual opening just so they can be sure to be the firsts one to get their hands on the Reality Verse? Or perhaps the MC just got lucky and all those campers was gone to take a piss when he got there... Preferred the the first version where he stood out of the line to help out that old man...

just hope this is not like chineseVRMMORPG full of cliche.

Tbh this chapter is a disappointment Everything is forced and unrealistic And this is the editted version? bruh... 😑😑😑

I hope its not a revenge novel. Reading a revenge plot is always boring

Hello, what happen to the syringe? Did he it already?

So you changed the grand opening scene from fulling of people to just those two. I am guessing because if it was full of people it wouldnt be difficult for someone to figure out who got the free reality verses and then track them down. However, I also agree with the other comments if the reality verse was as big of a deal as this world was making it out to be then there would definitely be people camping out. Maybe add in line saying normally you are not allowed to go near the building because if you do you will be escorted off the premises by guards. Then say the way they were going to have people experience the event was having them up signup by email and then sending out a notification of the specific time and date. After that maybe say if you get there too early or too late you are automatically disqualified. Issue with that being I dont know how you would explain Manato getting there at the very specific time to get the 100% synchronization reality verse. Unless Rika mentioned it in his past life once everyone else(atleast those who could afford one) got the tattoo which now that I think about it is the perfect way to explain how Manato would know the time .

it feels like a chore to read. just big blocks of text...

wasn't it invisibility mode nexus capsule

I just realized. You should definitely mention that the tattoo is not visible unless it's in use because if not it will stick out like a sore thumb. Not to mention him and Rika having the same style tattoo in the same place is very suspicious since their fellow classmates will notice(of Rika is still in Manato's class or school) . Especially if it leaks that two people got the 100% synchronization reality verses. Even if it doesn't, eventually the rich people like his arch nemesis are going to get that tattoo so it isn't a leap for Kazuki(I hoped I spelled that correctly) to realize that Manato has had the new reality verse far ahead of everyone else. Then he might be able to connect the dots between Manato and the abnormally strong Bladeheart because I imagine the 100% synchronization rate will give people a huge advantage in combat(over those who have lower synchronization rates) which Rika could serve as evidence proving that(if it is indeed true). Plus how is Manato or Rika going to get nutrients to their body when they are playing the game for long stretches of time. Unless the reality verse actually comes physically out of their tattoo which doesn't seem possible in this somewhat modern setting. Or maybe food in game actually satiates hunger in real life but that realism obviously doesn't/couldn't apply to combat(specifically taking damage in combat that if the realism did apply would affect your body outside) and or player death.

The syringe was never used, though he woke up and got his memories right away while holding the syringe, yet never was said he used it, though it wasn't even said what it was for either. I give up on logic

did he use the syringe? or not there is no word of it at all?!

I would've gone with the dragon

hmm don't like her hope she's not the fl way too early. Well let's see if this is a real op mc or a fake on

So you just skipped over the fact that his parents were dead in the old timeline, but now he's gone back in time, his parents are alive, but he's in Tokyo for 1 year working part-time jobs and hasn't bothered to go home and see his parents? How unfilial!

nice

Are you kidding me? this broke 17 yr old teenager is living in a detached 2 story house in Tokyo????

wowo. .. . I cant believe it change so much

thx for the chapter

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