mata0eve
I find the story interesting but there are loopholes in the plot that doesn't make sense. if she knew how to fight & be a strong character she wouldn't act cowardly in front of other people. why let those people run over u like that. not believable. the back story needs more details. no point in revenge if ur the one to let them walk over u like a coward u shown them.
hmmm.. I'm getting confused ? she has a powerful backing? she knows self defense ? why did she bear the torture from that dang parents and sister? was there no protection when her house was on fire and her adopted mother got injured? why she bother going back to that dumb family when she has one that spoils her???