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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen

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Alice_redfield
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glad that there's an update 🥰 thank you for the hard work author hehe I waited so many times like as in everyday I would check if there's an update already 😊

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Jessicanicoll
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10:08 p.m. 11-16-23: 7th reading:❤️❤️❤️❤️ Please Please Please don't finish writing this book series. There are so many things that can be done, to expand and enrich this story even more than ever before this chapter. You can have someone hold a meeting to plan what to do. The time tuner broke when Stormy stole the keys previously. Someone fixed the gadget so that it would make Chris, Ginny, and Colon older people. In that case, someone can use it to go to the past. Then, there will be at least 2 time tuners. Use the quantum leap hourglasses, to get more from the Ministry of Magic building.Wow! :Ideas:1. Use this time to let Ginny, Colon, and Luna, hear what is happening, through their talismans. special connections *(Fergus) also knows, due to his special connections to Chris.* Let everyone else know what's happening. *When Malgino talked to Chis, in the Ministry of Magic, her friends spoke to her, through the talismans. * Can Chris hear her friends, without letting Malgino know, that the friends are talking to Chris?*Now, we make a plan.* Make changes in history, such as preventing all of the bad things from happening to Chris before she gets to Hogwarts: different people visit different times in Chris's life, to keep her magic from exploding. For example, as the story goes, Chris becomes angry at someone. Chris screams. Only the annoying person hears Chris. That person's ears are damaged. I think the problem was temporary. Anyway, Fergus could go back to that day, to make sure that no one annoys Chris. That way, the magic doesn't cause problems, fear, and worse things. : Another set of things would be to prevent Fergus from being able to get Malgino to the Crimson Crystal or have a decoy crystal, that gives the illusion that Malgino is healing and all. Just when he attacks Fergus, Malginio drops dead. * After removing crimes, accidents, and trickery from the story ---> Prevent Malgino from being born!. Let Fergus know about the history of Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen so that Fergus can give a lot of his power to Chris.*Obviously, you can change Tom Riddle's life, too. :. Let the story flow from any point: Chis notes that throughout her life, weird things happen, plus strangers appear and then disappear, ...: Each magical person notices that their lives seem choppy--" Wait! What? How did I get to a different school, and why am I alone"?: Nobody else knows that the space-time continuum has changed - (no one else finds anything weird, paranormal, or supernatural about their lives. : It is hard to write like this--I can't make paragraphs. If any of these things work for you, please use these suggestions. I have been working on them for a long time. I don't know why I obsess about this art form.: Well, it's almost midnight. 11:55 p.m. 11-16-23. ..... Back to the Future

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Jessicanicoll
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Thursday, November 16th, 2023: 5:33 p.m. Eastern Standard Time is the latest chapter from Mystical Snowflake: This is Chapter 446: The Start of the End: Written 4 hours ago. This is a quantum leap for me, from a chapter called, "It's Alive". I am in my 7th reading.

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Qruiiller
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thx for the amazing work and thx for the chapter

TheSoleWatcher
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Keep up the amazing work my friend.