Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and The Loa's Child

The slang is crap.

There was more groovy and papa in this one chapter than I've ever seen ,in all my years on this earth, written down. WHY?

The slang does irritate me. Is there still slang in the later chapters?

Okay, so the boy has an eidetic memory and he knows more about magic than most people. Those are some good strengths to have and I hope you'll be able to use them properly in the future and not let his strengths go to waste. Overall, this story is progressing better then I had imagined.

I'm liking this New Orleans heritage thing. I was fond the Vampire Chronicles and The Witches of Mayfair series by Anne Rice. An important part of the story happens there. Hmm... thanks for the chapter

The slang is hard at first and a bit painful but if you wait a few chapters it goes away and this book is one of the best I've read fan fiction or not. So I would heavily recommend toughing it out.

I believe you seen Austin powers afew tomany times

Man I’m loving this story especially the way you captured the way we talk down south 😂. Keep up the good work my brother!

a bad 70s film?

You've done the mc way too many favors for him to be an interesting character. He can't have any accomplishments when everything's being handed to him. And if he does we're always going to know it was still basically handed to him because of all the cheats and unrealistic advantages he has.

I like the frel si far. Its different than the ussual content. Jncluding voodoo practice as being another worlds maguc was interesting too. Im curious what world dear mc was from as it wasnt vanilla earth. A alternate one like the supernatural world or vampire diaries or somethin in which voodoo did hoodoo.

I like the slang it's different then the rest of the stuff here.

I don't understand what happened. Did he move to the world of Harry Potter or did the worlds merge and go back in time in another body?

mm.. not judging.... but umm.... `groovy´ `papa´????

me reading this and searching what is this papa legba thing in google

two chapters of complete nonsense

Yo momma...

Thanks for the chapter

I miss this story so much, I'm reading it again, still hoping the author gonna come back and finish it!