Comments of chapter undefined of Feral Confessions - Adrianna And The Alpha
Feral Confessions - Adrianna And The Alpha
MishaK
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The constant change in perspective is more than a little dizzying in this chapter, making it difficult to tell who a given paragraph is focusing on until halfway through it. There needs to be more focus and consistency in the dialogue. We need more context. And it doesn't help when mister tall, masculine, wolfy male is simply referred to as "him" or "he"; there's more than one character these terms could potentially refer to ...
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MishaK
oh..Niiya you're so dead.đ Is it because Adriana is a half witch? She can use magic...she was born an alpha but being an alpha doesn't mean that you can use magic when it's needed. That blue eyes guy he is an alpha too the one who thrown her in first chapters and her mate.sorry for bad Englishâ
