schreient
Hey, I totally respect your opinion but just to give other incoming readers a different perspective I think the first couple chapters do a good job of setting backstory for the main character up and are vital to the general story. Also I saw in another comment of yours that the side stories bother you. This is just my opinion but I think that the side stories are something that make this story special and are pretty important as well seeing how much of an impact the mc's brother has on her though I won't go any further to avoid spoiling anything.