Comments of chapter undefined of Return of the demon
Return of the demon
Idontknowwhattosay
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anon88Lv6anon88
There were a few typos. In the first sentence of the second paragraph on page 10, Burin should be During; I think. In the last sentence of the second paragraph on page 15, “...that he wants..”, I think wants should have been wasn’t. Wants doesn’t make sense contextually.
mthakur31Lv1mthakur31
Idontknowwhattosay:This is the author. Sorry about the typos. Unfortunately, I dont have anyone to proofread this back, and when I read the words, they automatically rearrange in my head.
