Comments of chapter undefined of Bloodlust Revival

Hello! I am the author of this story. Thank you for reading this! This is my first story and I'm hoping that it will be a success. Please be guided that the words used on the story might be unusual and a bit different because I myself am not a gamer so I really find it difficult to use words and terms that I'm not familiar with. I also don't speak English often because it is not my first language so please understand if there are any grammatical errors as you read ahead. I have written lots of fantasy stories on my language already but this is my first writing on game genre so it really is a bit difficult considering that I also wrote it on English language. But nonetheless, I wanted to share this to everyone and I am happy to finally be able to.