Comments of chapter undefined of Fatal Attraction : The CEO & his Mischievous Wife

Fatal Attraction : The CEO & his Mischievous Wife

WinterQween

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WinterQweenAuthorWinterQween

I see what you mean, thank you for the constructive criticism! I'll make more of a note of that and try to make it more action/progression story based.

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keinekoLv15keineko

I like the plot but somehow the story can be so lengthy on unnecessary details. Especially on the chapters with different parts. Too much details that it can occupy a whole chapter. So many internal monologue that could be kept to a minimum. I hope the succeeding chapters will be more focused on the progression instead of individual thoughts.

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