Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman
Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman
ZerahNeko
Chapter comments36
I really wanna be nice about this novel. I wanna support... But there are just a few things that are irking me mega hard. (1). I know that the ML and FL have to have little moment's together... But does it have to be so forced? (2). Wtf is he so frickin persistent on knowing how she learned to shoot? He is a military man, he should know that the reasons people keep secrets are to protect themselves or something. (3). Trust me when I say this but there are a lot of grammar errors... I know that they are mistakes... But it just bother me. I really don't want to give up on the story... But it's just hard to read the same thing over and over again T∆T
This is supposed to be a romance novel but I don’t feel any romance between the ML and FL at all. I’m sorry author but their interactions are so mediocre and they kinda feel off. The ML’s character is also kinda weak to me. I mean he didn’t leave an impression to me at all. He was also very poorly introduced in the novel. I mean he didn’t appear until like 20+ chapters later so I was really looking forward to FINALLY read about him.
