akikan40
Almost all the conversations copied the anime đ The other ch is ok, there're some changes but this one is not. You can do better you know. And i don't understand about the battle board, mari win that race and she can participate in the mirage bat unlike the ori, so they can win this competition easily. Not to mention that from the start he already became athlete for monolith code, so the sentence about he have to participate in the tournament because there's some change in battle board is unnecessary And please reduce the sentence like "since haru was so popular, right?" "since haru was so .........., right?" Sentences like that just too much, it's boring to always find that sentence in every ch(sometimes more than 1 in a ch)