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Comments of chapter undefined of Netori System [Original]

Venooos_Geming
Venooos_GemingLv2Venooos_Geming

ok Somebody from Alabama here? because let's sing it SWEET HOME ALABAMA

swaran
swaranLv5swaran

Dude if all the women in your story are only going to be sluts who's willing to sleep with everyone who is powerful and even willing to betray their loved ones then you might as well stop writing this because sluts are only meant to be ****ed not loved and calling it a harem where every women is a slut is simply bull****, after all if you just want a large collection of sluts you can simply go to a red light district why waste time in women like them

AizenJabberwock
AizenJabberwockLv6AizenJabberwock

Well, this so far did not live up to my expectations. Of all the possibilities, having Hyssei be there due to a lame excuse and his sister still defending him despite he was half naked in the room in which her brother was never to even step into, and still act clueless, ignoring the fact that she is curing the bruised knee of the guy who almost killed her "beloved" bother in front of her and she din't bat an eye or even tried to cure him, I'm so disappointed I will simply not expect anything meaningful plot-wise coming out of this story. Also the chapter is titled R18 but the contents are far from what I'd classify as a bare minimum of an erotic work worth tagging as R18 given the crazy amount of over the top perverted stuff that gets posted on Webnovel every day

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Kazumayagami
KazumayagamiLv14Kazumayagami

Need more I won’t say things are getting interesting yet until he deals with silver & his elder sister but making his younger sister boyfriend watch the best revenge. you also gotta make him do the deed with his elder sister but she must suffer a fate worst than death. If it was in public while he uses an upgraded version of the time freeze that would be best while silver rias & everyone one else on their knees covered in blood. Also make him eradicate rias family and take grayfia and rias mom and the Phoenix mother & daughter duo in his harem pleas.

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brady_123464
brady_123464Lv4brady_123464

I just want u to post new chapters real quick or else im gonna lose my head over thinking how bitchy all the women in this story are (the women mentioned so far)...... FOR THEIR BETRAYAL THE MUST LICK THE MCs FEET FOR FORGIVENESS! The reason why everyone in the comments are saying they are sluts or bitches is cuz they set up a completely normal guy for absolutely 0 reason (apparently Asura got a reason but everyone knows its fucking stupid). I mean when u see ur own sisters latching on to complete scum and frame u who wouldn't think they are bitches... js

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DevilsArray
DevilsArrayLv5DevilsArray

Kill him, silver publically and legally. Smae with rias, rape as she accused and deliver her as a sow.

Zestia
ZestiaLv5Zestia

He didn't choose the geass eye power right??? Im so confused.

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Helios_Sol
Helios_SolLv5Helios_Sol

More please more please more please

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ZiaZombie
ZiaZombieLv11ZiaZombie

Thanks for the chapter, happy to see that at least his sister is not a thot and that it is all a misunderstanding. Can't wait till he reclaims his sisters and begins his conquest of cuckolding, Thanks for the chapter!

Celestial_Cat44
Celestial_Cat44Lv1Celestial_Cat44

I can't even begin to put into words how much him punching that guy made me feel so much better.

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

Sambingereader
SambingereaderLv2Sambingereader

very weird that she needed to bring him to her room to heal him... either someone is mind controlling her or shes just lying...

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the_excalebars
the_excalebarsLv4the_excalebars

🤣🤣🤣🤣 I like this

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Teleport
TeleportLv13Teleport

This is just hentai, no need to mind the plot, just turn off ur brain

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NoSchool_Arc
NoSchool_ArcLv10NoSchool_Arc

WTH did I get myself into

Horny_Dawg
Horny_DawgLv3Horny_Dawg

To be honest I skipped the whole cheating, I really don't like NTR even if it's light .. can someone tell me what happened ... sorry i'm not strong enough to see NTR realy .. please someone tell me what happened

LogicIsForVillans
LogicIsForVillansLv13LogicIsForVillans

Rias is not definitely or what else were the noise from mc room if not siilver doing the bang bang with her when mc was unconscious

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vihin
vihinLv5vihin

Hey author! If you need someone to edit your chapters. Just message me. I'll help you so that the release rate is high

Milk_Cream_Pig
Milk_Cream_PigLv3Milk_Cream_Pig

well this was disappointing. Why is his sister right now acting so inconsistent from the first chapters? Also, u should stop using japanese romaji and replace it with something else since it breaks the flow of the story. Heck even 'brother' is fine. And too much curse words that it's just sounding edgy.

DaoistZ189d6
DaoistZ189d6Lv2DaoistZ189d6

Lógica por favor dios

Blaman_10
Blaman_10Lv15Blaman_10

If he ends up not killing that dude I'm going to be really disappointed