Comments of chapter undefined of In Naruto as Orochimaru with a System (Reboot)

you can cut the thing in two, so how he decided to plan A then if the plan don't go well, you can display his have hidden plan B. Cannot work on every single action taken but can be interesting. Also, if you want to hide his plan you must let some info in the chapter. For example, if you want him to do, have hidden cart, they must be told somewhere, like if he got a tailed beast in captivity before making him reveal it on the battlefield. Hiding completely something is not good since it will look like plot armor (can work one time, but not many or it will lose its impact).

I think you need to give some Information from time to time , if not then there’s going to be to many Info dumps, or very long ones .

I thibk you could still make his plan hidden and misterious and when the plan works you give us a flashback chapter Well that's what I thin 🙂

A mix of most of the comments made her they are all pretty solid ideas

what the fork did he get from the evil packet dude

It will be confusing. and honestly I want to know how he create his plans 🧐

system related stuff need to be shown, plot-wise some details can be hidden but not everything

I choose to know the schemes and plans to not get confused. And when is the next chapter coming I already read this fanfic for the 3rd time.

DROPT ?????

This is annoying ESPECIALLY since this is supposed to be a REWRITE!!!! the first version was better and had way more chapters. This is trash.

Leave out 30% of the plan for the future.

You can give us hint, but not so oblivious that we know it immediately.

Dude where are you?! I'm missing you, my friend.

Plse update!! 😭😭🙏🙏

Don't need to show everything. Just show that he is planing attack the village but not how he's going to attack

Remain hiding, slowly unfold it as story progresses .

Interesting

Hmm...I don't really care if you reveal his plan or not as long as your English is readable.Though that grammar problem won't happen anytime soon.

Your friend ir right. But you shoul hidde someting sometime then explein with flashback