Comments of chapter undefined of Part-Time Star, Full-Time Dad

Cool hopefully they can start dating at some point instead of mc being a lil bitch. And if you use clones to **** either im out. Its not fair on sophie and mary plus its just not good

This chapter does feel a bit rushed compared to the other ones, but it's still good. Instead of having Sophie and Mary resolve it, it might have been better to have Theo do it. I mean, he's already told Sophie he's not looking for a relationship right now, so she shouldn't really be the one saying who he can sleep with or not. Now, that's not to say I dislike where this went. But with the way things are now, I don't see things working out very well. Sophie and Mary clearly dislike each other. They might end up pushing Theo away with both their own fighting and them trying to keep other girls away from him. If he becomes interested in another girl (like we all know he will be), and they actively antagonize her, even though they technically aren't in a relationship with him, I can only see that ending badly since it might put him on bad terms with the girl as well. Well, all I'm saying is Theo needs to be an active participant in his own love life decisions. He should lay down his own ground rules; so they don't start deciding things for him. Well, you can wait until it actually becomes an issue since I'm sure most people wouldn't think about such things after finding out they just got a harem.

More women = more motherly love for Rose 👍🏽😃

while wasn't a bad chapter doesn't have the same feel. honestly we don't need a update every day of the week. that's a good way of burning yourself out. Take your time and flesh it out slowly. otherwise it's a great book that you have created. keep up the great work

Thanks for the chapter. I'm all up for the harem but this chapter seems rushed. Honestly, the quality of the novel has dropped massively since you started everyday a chapter thing. And that's also a reason why you got a writers block. Imo change back to previous setup and release quality chapters instead of quantity even if it takes time. If you keep persisting with 1 chapter-a-day then I feel that sooner rather than later you're gonna drop this novel.

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thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter. Don't drop.

ceellebrate good timess comon

Is this dropped?

thanks for the chapter 😄 hope you could upload more soon

more chapters please

xp

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MORE!!!!

oh? you changed the chapter a bit? lean on me ended up in my recommendations again so i came back to reread a chapter so this is a pleasant surprise. in any case i like the parts you added much better. makes the whole thing flow a bit more smoothly. Theo isn't just a horn dog. he cares a lot about those around him so im glad he's showing it now.

Thanks for the chapter.

only mary and sophie more and the story will go bad