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Comments of chapter undefined of Blood Peony Emperor

kkmall656
kkmall656Lv1kkmall656

Hello : Sorry to bother you ! My name is Peter and I am from another writing platform. I read part of your story - " Blood Peony Emperor " I think is quite interesting for us. We are currently looking those adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). If you are a non exclusive writer in Wattpad, You might consider post your works in other platform to get more royalty. like our platform. So, if you have this thought, Please reply me ! let's discuss and see what we can offer you ! Thanks for your time, Peter

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niharikabhol
niharikabholLv10niharikabhol

Very beautifully written first chapter. Your writing style is impeccable. The way you have described the battle field, it feels like I am seeing it infront of me. Keep up the good work !!!

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Hamzable
HamzableLv4Hamzable

"The old General already knew the outcome of this battle; he had observed her quick mind many times in the past few weeks." I feel like the semicolon should be an em-dash.

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Hamzable
HamzableLv4Hamzable

"rose coloured" should be hyphenated

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NatsumeRikka
NatsumeRikkaLv5NatsumeRikka

Gah! What's with this beautifully written chapter!? A woman general is all I need for a good book.

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Euphia_Tadeo
Euphia_TadeoLv10Euphia_Tadeo

👏👏👏👏👏👏 nice novel

NoEnding
NoEndingLv3NoEnding

Wow... so nice

NoEnding
NoEndingLv3NoEnding

so interesting