Comments of chapter undefined of The Virgin Outcast Who Stole The Emperor's Heart

I feel like it’s a misunderstanding. And that evil mother has something to do with it.

I already feel sorry for the ML. He loves her but she absolutely hates him.

Where can I read the Emperor POV?? Have you figure it out how to add it??? I really want to read it.... please...

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No idea what is happening, but there are lots of feelings

Love can be tricky

Seems interesting

I held my breath too. So the mother queen is a witch. And Nana has a grudge with this family.

This is good story line.. His Father I understand had her family killed & his evil Queen Mum is just as bad as his Father but I get the vibe that the current Emperor is not like either of his parents. I hope anyway!! I really hope that a great romance 💓will bloom between these two!!!

I hope this story is about her becoming stronger. Really hoping she doesnt stay w/ this wimpy personality. 🤨

I hope he has nothing to do with killing her parents. I know his father was responsible but I'm hoping it was just his parents doing wrong to her.

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Story: 🤔 Well for this chapter. It was clearer. Nana's fear, and some background history of the past. This was good, you clarified what was happening currently and the reference to the past. Grammar Some repetitive words. "I'm useless." You could break down this part example --> "I'm useless.. I'm useless.." (Start a new paragraph) • Breaking down your paragraphs is good too. There was a long piece of text which you could have split into two.

More update please

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