Comments of chapter undefined of Ms. Attractive and inciting CEO

Ms. Attractive and inciting CEO

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pvrmageshLv5pvrmagesh

I always love strong FL. So far the start is really good. Happy that I added this novel in my library. Keep up the good work author dear. And... Never give in to those negative comments. Take it as your stepping stones of improvement.

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VoidDreamerLv4VoidDreamer

It's not perfect, but it's not impossibke to read, but the dialogues are not that natural: you should work on it!!! 😁

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AvalonKingLv13AvalonKing

Good story but truly needs an editor. Not only for easy to mix up words but also to restructure the sentences into a way that’s better to read and doesn’t always have readers guessing what you really meant to say.

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IkOn1_hatemeLv5IkOn1_hateme

The story is good!! I'll keep reading it... Writing I'll give it a 7/8 out of 10. Overall its Amazing❤

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juliettehusbandsLv4juliettehusbands

Justice was handed out to those weaklings.

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CzarlynLv5Czarlyn

Interesting, must read. thank you.

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lily_wintersLv1lily_winters

nice story

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Adeola_Balogun_4227Lv4Adeola_Balogun_4227

nice

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Khalia_MosleyLv3Khalia_Mosley

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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Gentle_BreezeLv14Gentle_Breeze

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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gechukwuLv11gechukwu

Too bad I spent all my power stone, but from now on would start voting for this novel

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atmp6778Lv13atmp6778

thank you author

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prettytam2xLv6prettytam2x

Interesting...

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PandoraaaLv5Pandoraaa

I like this novel but the grammar is so so. You are mixing up week with weak. Btw this is just some advice not a hate comment

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Sahithi_KondreddiLv12Sahithi_Kondreddi

Anyone from india??

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AllisonKayne1Lv15AllisonKayne1

it's a good book but the grammar needs help

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weng2018Lv11weng2018

Whoa.what an explosive opening story

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siva1976Lv3siva1976

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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Gaggu_BehaniwalLv3Gaggu_Behaniwal

Thanks for these services.

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jaykoi_mcCoyLv4jaykoi_mcCoy

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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GeetRathLv5GeetRath

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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