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It's not perfect, but it's not impossibke to read, but the dialogues are not that natural: you should work on it!!! đ
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Good story but truly needs an editor. Not only for easy to mix up words but also to restructure the sentences into a way thatâs better to read and doesnât always have readers guessing what you really meant to say.
The story is good!! I'll keep reading it... Writing I'll give it a 7/8 out of 10. Overall its Amazingâ¤
Justice was handed out to those weaklings.
Interesting, must read. thank you.
nice story
nice
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
Too bad I spent all my power stone, but from now on would start voting for this novel
thank you author
Interesting...
I like this novel but the grammar is so so. You are mixing up week with weak. Btw this is just some advice not a hate comment
Anyone from india??
it's a good book but the grammar needs help
Whoa.what an explosive opening story
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