Comments of chapter undefined of Spring Winds [GL]

Thanks for the chapter isaaaaa~! your writing is really good so don't worryyyyy... *jellyy~*

na, it just takes a little while to get chapters xD. - What we will see now, it will be that both will go through a test that will prove their love (I mean like a genjutsu, where they are unconscious, so that they pass the test of the spirit that managed to capture the love that one of the girls feels xD).

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Thanks for the chapters Isa sorry I haven’t commented in a while but the slow burn is agonizing... keep up the great work 😸

i think your doing great

Thanks for the chapter but

Too bad neither of them said “Rather than be buried with their lover I’d rather ascend to immortality with them to be with them forever.” The chapter seemed pretty good, I didn’t find any errors in the grammar or writing and it was enjoyable to read.

I don't see any errors anywhere except... a bit of grammar and vocabulary. It might as well be a graphically infallible tale. Congratulations, on reaching the milestone. I know it was not an easy journey, full of ups and downs. Two ladies in the tomb of two lovers... what else could happen next? After glimpsing a manual entitled 'The fastest way to cultivate', let's see where our baby girls would end up. Thanks Dear Author, for making my day.

No no and no.... Your writing hasn't worsened even by a single but... Except ofcourse for the time taken to write a chapter... I enjoy every single bit of this book and am so excited to know you're gonna try to send in more chapters (☆▽☆). But personally I think that that author's spirit that's telling you that your writing has worsened(albeit wrong), is to some extent a good thing because that certain kind of dissatisfaction about the status quo helps you and encourages you to get better. But that aside, nothing should convince you that this isn't one of the best books in webnovel...because am sure that whoever has read any small part of it can testify with me.Happy new year Isa ┌|o^▽^o|┘♪

a single bit*👆