IsaChiu
I was seriously stoked, when I saw only 8 chapters, I was like "the fuk? Is webnovel fuking with me?" Then I checked it. Turns out you rewritten it! It really shook me :0 in a good way of course, me being a mindless reader didn't see much of it until I read it thoroughly. Honestly Author, you made great improvements, your description on your characters and flow has definitely improved, the descriptions aren't too overwhelming and or missing the details, it's just the right amount. Also can I mention how I love the dialogue? Seriously I love it when they curse it's funny, because I don't see much cursing on cultivation novels, also good world building, I can imagine it more clearly, on how it would work out in a setting where cultivation is of the norm. Overall I still love everything about it, thank you for your hard work :) (but seriously though I feel like I got a better picture with the new vers)
Hi! I'm Kai, and I'm here to ask if theres any other way I can contact you. Me and some friends are interested in translating your novel into PT-BR, so we would like to chat with you a little bit. We really found your novel super cute and wholewholesome, and GL novels are super rare, specially in our language. We're super excited and hoping you'll allow us to translate it!
It's really good, ZNR has still this trouble asking persona and just as lazyluck06 said more mature, which isn't bad at all. And your describtion ability is far better than at the start your previous first chapter, I'm not saying that it was bad before please don't understand me wrong ; ) It's enjoyable and am wondering how much YLH changed. Thank you very much đ