JennyS
Really like the story so far, but would like to see where the romance starts to play in? right now i feel as though it is mostly about food.
I really like the story! I noticed you often write "taught" when you mean "thought", "taught" is the past form of "teach", "thought" is the past form of "think".. And you write "peace" instead of "piece", "peace" is when there is no war, "piece" is a bit of something.. It's really just a reminder, the story is very interesting so thank you for writing đ
I love the slow pace of the story even with all the minor grammar and spelling mistakes. This just goes to show that even with the language barrier, if you have the imagination to create a good story, it will still be something people will want to read đ keep up the good work, author! â€ïžđđđ