Comments of chapter undefined of The Geared Immortal

Is he using qi and Mana both or only Mana?

*sigh How is it his fault that she wasn't clothed and he made clothes for her jeez.

Bro, you need training when it comes to writing down romantic scenes.

The grammar needs a little work but otherwise it is fine; however the character and environmental development are very poor. The premise that this story is based on is decent but the implementation is poor. When using the A-F grading scale I would put this story on high F low D range. That being said this is sadly one of the best written of the stories on multiple sites.

i hope it isn’t a lovely dovy story

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Googles that can Zoom 3000 Km? Not Meter but Kilometer? fck that More like a Telescope than anything.

I like how the story started, but the character development is in my opinion a bit lacking. He was so devastated when his girlfriend dumped him but suddenly can't stop thinking about how beautiful the new chick is? And what about her, she wakes up naked and knows not where she is or what happened to her, shouts at him for being naked but can't stop looking at him and then suddenly, like in 2 pages, she is sooo in love .... I was enjoying it much more when it was just about him learning and cultivating in a new world 😣 but I must also say that the translation work was good

imma dropped not my type of story maybe the others well like it.

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What was he goig to do have her wounds get infected and sllow her to die or clothe bathe her and clean he rwounds and ensure her survival and have a woman call you s pervert for saving her life yeah being called a pervert is annoying is because you saved them but its because you saved a life its good

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So any girls reading this? I'm curious would you be pissed like her or would you be thankful that someone cleaned you up and made you clothes even though they saw you nude?